As writers and authors we know we need capture our readers attention. After a potential reader has picked up our book, possibly due to the cover artwork and reading the blurb, the first line or two can clinch the deal.

So the most worked on, pondered and despaired lines of our opening chapter are vital. They must capture a reader’s attention so completely that they are compelled to continue reading. Sounds easy doesn’t it? It is far from easy it though.

There are some key elements that draw a reader in

1. Make them wonder.
2. Begin with a pivotal moment.
3. Create an interesting scene.
4. Intrigue them with a character.
5. Begin with an unusual instance.
6. Use a compelling narrative voice.
7. Begin with a conflict.
8. Use a life changing moment.
9. Ensure your first line(s) are vivid, unusual and gripping.
10. The line is uniquely your voice.
11. Make them surprising or funny, but always true and clear to the narrative.
12. If possible this first line should contain the entirety of a novel.

Of course, there are multiple examples in literature from the classics to modern day novels, which can give us inspiration on how to create a powerful first line. Take your time creating yours.

Here are examples of my first lines:

The Commodore’s Gift – Owena’s scream of “Stop” was abruptly halted by her brother Benjamin’s, large rough hand over her mouth and another around her waist stopping her from lurching toward the window to see where the girl lay.

The Twesome Loop – Brett gave Dawn a wink as he passed her desk. Her eyes smiled back as he took in her deep cleavage and musky perfume.

Life in Slake Patch –  Jacob’s persistence to get me to look at an extraordinary book had gotten the better of my curiosity. He led the way down the steps into the old library basement.

Rython Legacy – Juliana held her granddaughter in her arms; it was a bitter sweet moment

Malgraf’s Dawning – The dark eyed child sat huddled in the corner, tossing runes on the earth floor. She mumbled and whispered overheard words.

All my novels are all available on the online purchase sites.

How long did it take you to finalize your first line?

Care to share your favourite?