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Reflection on my 7 day Writing Retreat Road Trip

June 20, 2019
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I’m changing it up a bit today to reflect on my week long writing road trip. We traveled 2400 kms in 7 days and enjoyed wildlife, magnificent scenery as well as writing and reading time.

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My plan was to cover these projects while on this retreat.

  1. Continue with my steampunk novel, The Commodore’s Gift.
  2. Add to a short story for an anthology submission.
  3. A social media review.
  4. Finish one book and start another.
  5. Edit fellow authors last chapters of novel writing group.

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The result?

  1. I did add to the steampunk novel
  2. Managed more for the anthology submission
  3. Social media review was reviewed when I got back home
  4. Didn’t manage to finish the book but very close to finishing now
  5. Finished editing the fellow author’s manuscript

So I did quite well considering.

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Do you plan how you will complete projects?

Do you list them in priority or tackle them when the mood takes you?

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Happy writing.

Writing Prompt Wednesday

February 21, 2018
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Prompt – Write about a Fairy

To be honest this was an easy prompt for me as the character written about, Petal Soft, is one from my children’s chapter book.

Petal Soft flew in and out of the long grass in the meadow, stopping occasionally to inspect a flower, one here, and one there. Her fairy wings glistened in the sunshine. She was looking for the perfect hat. The snowdrop hat she wore was tattered and worn now and it was time to replace it. With the warmth of spring sunshine and gentle showers the meadow grew lush. The green grass was dotted with all the colours of the rainbow by beautiful flowers opening their petals to the sky.
            Should she choose yellow, which was a bright cheerful colour or red to be more dramatic at the fairy dance? As she flew back and forth, Petal Soft considered each flower and its colour carefully. The dance was a special one not only to celebrate spring but also to mingle with fairies from far and wide. Petal wanted to meet a certain fairy whose magic was said to be more powerful than any other. If Petal could learn just one of those extraordinary spells she would be so happy.
            Along the edge of the meadow grazing contently stood three deer, they glanced up as Petal passed by but were not alarmed. She smiled and flew forward and gasped in surprise when she saw the most beautiful flower. It was a woodland orchid almost hidden in the shade of a birch tree. Its soft cream colour was splashed with bright pink it was perfect.
            Bowing low, Petal asked the flower if she could take it. A whisper of wind was the only answer needed. Plucking the flower from the stem, Petal turned the petals this way and that appreciating their beauty.
            On the night of the dance, Petal Soft adorned her head with the stunning orchid and wore a cream dress so as not to detract from its beauty. When she flew into the gathering place all heads turned to admire her hat.

         She met the elder that night and became her apprentice learning special spells all because her orchid hat was the most beautiful. 

Meet Petal again in Ockleberries to the Rescue. http://www.dreamwritepublishing.ca/products/ockleberries-rescue

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She also appears in a story in this newly released anthology.

https://www.amazon.ca/Fireflies-Fairy-Dust-Fantasy-Anthology-ebook/dp/B079KFLXZC

Fireflies & Fairy Dust

Try your hand at writing a story about a fairy. I would love to read it.

 

HAPPY 150th CANADA

July 1, 2017
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I’m sharing my story of my first visit to Canada – this will be published in my writing group’s Canada 150 special anthology.book project

My First Taste of Canada by Mandy Eve-Barnett

My first visit to Canada was in the early eighties, a last big vacation before starting up my company, knowing vacations would be impossible for at least a few years while the company grew. I believed, at the time, that it would be a once in a lifetime trip.

                Arriving in Edmonton in late July invaded my senses with big city life. A country girl all my life with only occasional trips to London, UK for art galleries, museums and shows, the buzz of the city around me was hard to acclimatize to – the heat, noise, fumes, people and sirens – all assaulted my senses. Added to this was attending the unforeseen wedding ceremony and reception of a distant cousin. My mind became blurred at names and faces of people I had no real knowledge of before that day. Maybe a few too many glass of cheer didn’t help!

                The next day my Uncle and Aunt took me on a tour of the city sights, I marveled at the height of the buildings – glass and metal reflected the heat and I quickly became uncomfortable. Air conditioning, an unknown phenomenon until then, was soon my best friend. Large department stores all encased in cool aired malls saved me from heat exhaustion. Fashions, ornaments, accents and manners intrigued and delighted me. An evening meal at a nice restaurant satisfied, but a visit to a local club with a younger cousin was more enlightening than first expected. The club looked like many discos of the era and it took me a while to realize the absence of young men. Not knowing my cousin very well I was wary to ask the obvious question. All was revealed once we sat down and the lights dimmed. One after the other male strippers entertained the all female audience. With a room full of excited and tipsy women the doors opened to the young men who had queued outside waiting on nine o’clock. It was certainly an experience!

                My Uncle and Aunt owned a small RV and this was our mode of transport to Vancouver, their home town. Our route would take us through the Rocky Mountains and until I saw those magnificent structures I had no field of reference to their size and magnitude. Used to rolling hills and lush greenery these monoliths in dark steel grey, snow capped and craggy were awe inspiring. Mile upon mile of evergreen firs spread outwards in all directions, rising sharply to the base of the mountains and becoming sparse on the rocky outcrops. Taking it all in was mind blowing; my head turned this way and that at speed trying not to miss a single view, a glimpse of a wild animal or roaring river.

After several hours we took a rest stop in what seemed to me an isolated cabin restaurant overlooking a lake. The food was good, the ability to walk and stretch even more welcome. Just as we were leaving a thundering sound filled the air and the owner of the establishment urged us outside. Fearing something awful was about to happen I stayed close to my Uncle. We stood in awe as an avalanche crashed its way down the mountainside on the far side of the lake. The sound echoed around us, the ground beneath our feet shivered, and our chests felt the shock wave of air as it rushed past. In that moment I understood the absolute power of nature, trees snapped like twigs, huge boulders rolled and were consumed and the landslide of snow and ice crashed into the lake water making a tidal wave. Nothing could stop that power, that motion.

                When the last of the avalanche snow slid downwards, we returned into the restaurant by kind invitation of the owner to celebrate with a glass of champagne. He admitted in the fifteen years he had owned the restaurant it was the first avalanche he had seen. We were there no more than an hour and a half and witnessed such a spectacular event. I will always remember the sight and sound of that avalanche it has stayed with me for decades.

                Our onward journey was not without more adventure however. The temperature dropped quite significantly as we drove further into the Rocky Mountain range and I huddled under a blanket, peering out at the scenery that changed dramatically as the sky became overcast. Snowflakes began to fall much to my surprise but not to my Uncle and Aunt, who assured me it was common in the higher altitudes. The snow fell heavier and the mountains disappeared under a white curtain. Our reduced speed and burgeoned windshield wipers made me anxious but my Aunt comforted me saying my Uncle had driven in such conditions before. Then there was a sputter, a sudden decrease in speed and then all was quiet. The engine died and I saw my relative’s shoulders tense. Now what? Unfurling a map my Uncle plotted his route and estimated our location.

“There is a hotel around the next bend, if I’m correct on our position. We will make it that far.”

   Easing the RV along slowly he inched our way toward the hoped for hotel. At the bend we saw a grey shape materialize and formed into a hotel. Spluttering to the front of the building the RV stalled as if to say my work is done. There were only a couple of vehicles outside the hotel so my Uncle went in to investigate. On his return he advised us the hotel staff were working on a grand opening after a refurbishment and that they were not actually open yet. However, understanding our predicament they made up a couple of rooms for us and one young man helped fix the RV the following morning, allowing us to continue to Vancouver. A place I really loved mainly due to the ocean view and salty air so like home for me.

Canada is now my home and I have come to know a small part of it through incredible road trips with my dear friend, Linda. I will never ‘see’ all of Canada – the continent is just too vast but my experiences and friendships have given me some knowledge of Canada and it’s inhabitants.

Happy Birthday Canada

 

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Corvidae Blog Tour – Laura VanArendonk …

August 10, 2015
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Is “Sanctuary” based on someone you know, or events in your own life?

Sort of. My day job is animal training, and I was at a major behavior & training conference where a colleague (the fantastic Ken Ramirez) shared his progress in exploring counting in dogs. He had some pretty cool work going (and it’s gotten even more amazing since).

That night at dinner I sat next to Ken, and I told him he’d given me a short story idea. We laughed over it, and ultimately that wasn’t the direction the story went, but that’s where it started.

Is this your first time writing about corvids and/or scarecrows?

Yes, this is my first time with a corvid as a real character, though her role is supporting at best. Not the first time with an animal character, though. As I said, my day job is animal behavior, so I get pretty picky about animal characters and they need to be done right!

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What do you enjoy most about writing?

I… I don’t even know how to answer this. Like, what do you enjoy most about eating, the fact that it’s necessary to nourish your body or that it can taste so amazingly good or that we often make it a social bonding experience or that we can do it in so many different and wonderful ways? Yeah, that’s like enjoying writing. It’s almost too big a question.

I really like telling stories. And while a story might have a theme or even, occasionally, a message, the story is the point. No message will be carried well by a lame story. But a good story is self-sufficient and can, if it needs to, convey a message.

What worries you about writing?

Sometimes I worry that people read into stories and make judgments which might not be valid.

Obviously if a character says something racist or sexist, that’s the character’s view, and not the author’s view. That’s an easier concept to defend, especially if it’s a villain talking. But sometimes literary critiquing gets overambitious and generalizes. Someone might point out that I have a villainous activist in this story, for example, and that means I am opposed to animal welfare. But animals are both my profession and my hobby, I love them and I want them to be happy and healthy! You can’t connect a line from a single point. But the internet is good at reacting.

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What age did you start writing stories/poems?

I know I had a collection of hand-written tales by eight or nine, but I can’t be certain when I actually started writing. I wrote a lot during class in middle and high school; it was more interesting than algebra. Though I recall those stories now and laugh at how dreadful they are even just in memory. I’m scared to rummage through and see if I still have those notebooks – they’re probably even worse in reality!

Where do you get your ideas?

The better question for writers might be, how do you avoid being overwhelmed by the onslaught of ideas? I don’t think I’ve ever known a serious writer who complained for lack of ideas.

Story germs are everywhere. As I said, the inspiration for “Sanctuary” came from a work conference. A single photograph I took at a ruined Roman bath added about 150,000 words to my epic fantasy series in progress. An interesting factoid about the disgrace and ruin of a 15th century Islamic general, picked up fifteen years ago as I was researching something else, popped up in my head last year as a historical fantasy short.

Is there one subject you would never write about as an author? What is it?

Wow. Um, never is a really big word, so I really can’t think of one.

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What book are you reading now?

I’ve actually just started a non-fiction book my sister gave me for my birthday, an overview of influential and/or maligned women in history called Bad Girls. I pull a lot of starting ideas from history, so I really like nerdy stuff. Plus, I like women who accomplish things.

Do you see writing as a career?

Yes. I’m self-employed as an animal trainer, so it’s an easy leap to be self-employed in writing, too. Though I have to say, since self-employment is typically described as “twice the hours for half the wages,” doing it double is not necessarily smart!

Do you nibble as you write? If so what’s your favorite snack food?

Oh gosh yes. Dark chocolate is my writing vice of choice. If I’m pretending to be healthy, it’s dark chocolate covered almonds, though I will happily accept other options.

Where do you see yourself in ten years?

Probably regretting my unrestrained indulgence in dark chocolate…..

What is your best marketing tip?

On social media, be yourself and be interesting. (No, those aren’t incompatible, because you’re a writer. If your writing is interesting, your talk about it and yourself should be interesting.) If your Twitter feed is nothing but book-spam, I’m quitting you so hard. But if you are an interesting person, I’ll probably be interested in what you write.

When you do talk about your book, tell me what makes it interesting. Dark lord, artefact, star-crossed lovers, I see a dozen of those at a glance. Even if your book has one or several of those – nothing is wholly original! — tell me why I should read yours over the others.

What genre is your next project? What is it about?

I have too many “next projects”! It’s a very bad personal weakness.

I have an epic fantasy series I’ve been writing for over a decade which hasn’t been published yet. I hope to get it into the light of day in the next year.

I have a fantasy serial for which I likewise haven’t started release yet, because I knew my schedule would be unreliable. I’m having a lot of fun with it, though; it’s alternately funny and gritty and traditional high fantasy and your favorite anime.

And then I have a couple of short stories which I’ll be sending out soon, including my first science fantasy. Fingers crossed.

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BIO:

Laura VanArendonk Baugh was born at a very early age and never looked back. She overcame her childhood deficiencies of having been born without teeth and unable to walk, and by the time she matured into a recognizable adult she’d become a behavior analyst, a costumer/cosplayer, a chocolate addict, and a fiction and non-fiction writer.

LINKS:

www.LauraVanArendonkBaugh.com

www.twtter.com/Laura_VAB

www.facebook.com/LauraVBaugh

Welcome Newcomer MeriAnn Boxall…

March 5, 2015
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What inspired you to write your first book?

I have always loved writing. When I was younger, I would write and illustrate stories. Then my mother would staple the spine and tell me it was a real book. I believed her. From that time I have always wanted to finish a novel and then see my name on the cover. I met some really great people going to a writing group and through them and their organization I was luckily able to submit my story for the anthology and see it come to fruition.

How did you come up with the title?

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The title of my story is The Red Portal. I had the story completely finished and couldn’t find a name. I asked for ideas. A combination came back and I actually took two that my sister sent to me and put them together.

Is this your first book? How many books have you written (published or unpublished)?

This will be my first published story. I have finished two other novels and I am working on my third. None of them have been published yet, but I am just starting the querying process.

Is there a message in your novel that you want readers to grasp?

I want readers to embrace their uniqueness. It is what helps them to stand out and make them who they are. It is also what makes the world so fun. If we are all the same and afraid to stand out then all creativity is lost. I hope to give the message to my children that they should just be who they are. That person is the very best.

How much of the book is realistic?

The thoughts and feelings of Isabelle are very real. The surroundings and actions, however, are very much a part of dreams.

Are your characters based on someone you know, or events in your own life?

Most of the characters are not based on anyone real, but combined ideas of a lot of people around me. However, the stern and overprotective nature of Grandmother is very reminiscent of my own Grandmother growing up. She loved me very much, fiercely even, but in my youth I didn’t quite understand that. I often misunderstood that to mean disappointment when it may not have been at all.

If you had to do it all over again, would you change anything in your latest book?

I learned so much through the whole process of writing to publication. The number of rewrites and updating is overwhelming at best. I met a lot of great people and the thickness of my skin definitely increased. I am very proud of the final result and really excited to share it.

Do you have anything specific that you want to say to your readers?

Writing is something that I love and publishing a book has always been a dream of mine. I am so thankful to those that have supported me on the journey and continue to support me, and the others in the anthology, by buying the book and future books as well.

What is your favorite part/chapter of your book/project?

I love that Isabelle is real. I feel connected with her thoughts and feelings. I love how she pushes boundaries and finds the secret door.

What is your favourite theme/genre to write?

I love writing and reading fantasy. There is something easy about getting lost in another world. I also love crime fiction books and have completed writing one in that genre as well.

Is there one subject you would never write about as an author? What is it?

I am not sure there is a subject that would be off-limits if I found a story it in and felt a connection to it. There are many that I am not sure I would be daring enough to write about, but I would not say never.

What book are you reading now?

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I am currently reading the The Book of Life by Deborah Harkness (audiobook), Touch and Go by Lisa Gardner (e-book) and The Boys in the Boat by Daniel James Brown (paperback). I usually have a couple going at a time so no matter what format I need I have a good book ready. .

Are there any new authors that have grasped your interest?

There are a few other authors in the anthology that I have read and really enjoyed. I am anxiously waiting for their newest releases. Lehua Parker writes the Niuhi Shark Saga. Christine Haggerty is set to release the second book in her Acquisitions Series. Angela Hartley just released her first in Copper Decent. I have enjoyed all of Johnny Worthen’s books and I can’t forget Teri Harman as I just finished her Blood Moon book in the Moonlight Trilogy. There are great authors in our anthology and I am still reading them all.

Do you see writing as a career?

I do. It sure takes enough work. I am looking forward to being able to spend more time writing and hope to make a full career doing so one day.

Where do you see yourself in ten years?

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I have young kids so they will just be getting into high school by then. I will be chasing them, probably about as much as I do now, but I also see myself writing more and fully see a published book that is all my own too.

Is there anything you find particularly challenging in your writing?

Finding the time to write is probably the most challenging. My family comes first, so my time to write often happens when I should be sleeping. I am learning to write through the noise when I get a chance.

Have you ever hated something you wrote?

I don’t remember hating anything I have written but there are some that I look at and I know they aren’t quite ready to show to the world.

What book do you wish you had written?

I have always loved Hatchet by Gary Paulson. I think this is the first book that gave me a love for reading on my own. A love for dreaming. I would love to have written this book and given such a passion to another young reader.

What is your best marketing tip?

Be brave. Take chances and get yourself out there. Talk to people, send emails, and ask for help. You have more reach than you know and each person you meet or connect with, they have reach too.

What genre is your next project? What is it about?

I am just starting to send queries on a fantasy novel strong in Native American Folklore.

Here is a basic introduction:

After running from her past for four hundred years, Hania, a Golem, discovers that someone she once knew is the oppressive leader responsible for the lack of hope and compassion in America. An understanding of the Native American history and folklore, that tells her where she came from, may be the key to her own survival. She must decide if she will open her painful history and draw from her experiences during the Trail of Tears and World War I to fight her way back to finding her self-worth and become the leader she needs to be. With her unusual companions—a snarky run-away, a free-spirited musician, and an elderly medicine—she embarks on a quest to defeat, Halleck, a leader set on controlling mankind through his army of Seminole warriors. The only way she can see to win, is to create an army of Golem women warriors.

Can you tell us about your upcoming book?

My story The Red Portal will be in the Secrets and Doors Anthology:

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The Juvenile Diabetes Research Foundation (JDRF) is studying the prevention of the autoimmune attack that can evolve into T1D. They are working toward eradicating the need for insulin by keeping insulin producing beta cells alive. JDRF’s ultimate goal is to stop T1D before it starts, by creating a universal vaccine. All proceeds for Secrets and Doors will go to JDRF in support of their mission to treat and eradicate T1D.”

How do we find your books, blog and bio?

You can find me at: http://www.meriannboxall.com. Also at https://www.facebook.com/authormeriannboxall, and Twitter: @meriannboxall.

Bio:  MeriAnn Boxall resides in the mountains of Northern Utah with her husband and two children. A work-at-home mom she has a Master’s in Business Administration and most often finds herself teaching college courses online and writing grants for nonprofit organizations. Growing up in a small town rich with culture she developed a love for the art of storytelling. She is an avid reader who loves being outdoors, boating, and trail-running in the mountains that surround her home.

Join me in wishing Meriann future success.

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