Hello All,
Would you please read my story submission on Canada Writes? The title is Creative Promise Achieved.
Asking A Favor…
October 9, 2014
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Mandy Eve-Barnett's Blog for Readers & Writers 
October 9, 2014 at 9:26 pm
I love the last paragraph! It grabbed me. I think you should strive to make the first two as sharp and crisp as this one. Good luck! Also let us know where you emigrated from.
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October 10, 2014 at 6:40 am
Thanks Patty – unfortunately once submitted I can not go back – but we will see.
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October 10, 2014 at 6:40 am
Thanks Patty – unfortunately once submitted I can not go back – but we will see.
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October 10, 2014 at 6:43 am
Oh Mandy I totally misunderstood!! I thought you were asking for feedback before you submitted! I feel like an idiot I’m so sorry. The entry does stand very well without change as it leads to a very dramatic and inspiring conclusion. I thought you were specifically looking for something to change. Ug.
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October 10, 2014 at 7:47 am
That’s fine Patty -don’t worry. I always appreciate feedback!
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October 9, 2014 at 8:51 pm
Reblogged this on chrismcmullen and commented:
Wondering as a writer if you belong? Here, an author shares her story of when she discovered that she belongs.
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October 10, 2014 at 6:41 am
Thanks Chris…appreciated
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October 9, 2014 at 12:25 pm
Well done Mandy! So glad you discovered your passion and that it is writing.A brave adventure to move to a new country – you took a chance and it turned out great.
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October 9, 2014 at 12:54 pm
It has been an adventure and a life changing one
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October 9, 2014 at 12:20 pm
Great story, very inspiring.
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October 9, 2014 at 12:54 pm
Thank you for reading it – much appreciated.
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